Shot cause panic in the midle of the night
Contextual Type: dramatic event
Quality Idea: News Information
Language:Grammar correction
In this text there ara a few grammar mistakes, some words arte not the right ones for the context and it needs some comas and stops.
The paragraph order is fine.
My feedback would be underlining the mistakes and then give assesment on the same paper, concentrating on the positive feedback to encourage learning then giving advice on how to correct the mistakes.
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